Saturday, 30 December 2017
VE Day!
In my imagination I would eat lots of candy and be rich and with I would soend on my mums house mine and my brother and sisters collage give some to my grandma so she can keep building her house and buy toys for my sisters and my brother and give food to himelss people eve maybe I can build them a house and I would have a lovely family two kids a husband and enough room for me even a good job that,gets me the perfect amount of money when fourteen I'm going to be a public babysitter and that is my imagination.By Leah
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Mōrena Leah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jordan and I'm the Kootuitui (Papakura, South Auckland) cluster manager. I also have the absolute pleasure of being able to blog with you!
Ka pai for attempting this activity, I see that you've given us a nice little story from your wonderful imagination so well done for that!
It's really lovely that you have goals and aspirations; they're really important and good to have. Well done for knowing what you want to work towards at such a young age!
I'm glad that you would spend money on your family, how very selfless of you!
Even offering to build homeless people houses, wow!
Although your story is wonderful, it would help me out so much next time if you remembered to place full stops and commas in your writing so that I can easily follow your stories.
Also, because this activity is focused around VE Day, could you tell us what you would like to do at your party? Maybe you could even upload a picture! If you do this, then I can reward you with full points!
I'll check in on this post to see how you're going :)
Keep up the great story telling and I'll talk to you soon!
Cheers,
Jordan