Saturday, 30 December 2017
Women at Work
The place exploded everyone died but there last man standing but he had company because some people survived there was a nurse a doctor and other people even a scientist they are trying to find a missing piece to there machine.What machine are asking well a machine that can turn the world around again that means that they are going to save the world before that bomb even existed,they tried and tried but guess what happens always goes wrong so and they made hungry human brain eating, ZOMBIES!And that's why they put them n a cage before they get eaten.But finally they found the missing piece of the machine and that WORKED!They got all of their familys and what do to those zombies well they were vegetarians and all that they ate was vegetables and that is the end of this story goodbye for next time.By Leah.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Leah,
I love your story! It has lots of twists and turns. I really like how you have used your imagination to really make it an interesting story by including zombies, but vegetarian zombies! I’m glad that everyone didn’t die at the end!
Just a quick reminder that sometimes we need to proofread our work to check our spelling and grammar before we post it. A simple way to do that is to read it out to yourself, that way you can easily see where you might need to add full stops or to change words.
Keep the posts coming!
-Dani