Thanks for providing us with two facts about The Beatles Tour, well done! I like how you've added some description in to your writing; this helps your readers to understand exactly what happened. It sounds as though the crowd was swelling with excitement. Its unfortunate people had to get hurt, but people do crazy things at concerts when their idol is literally metres away.
Can you tell me another fact about The Beatles Tour in New Zealand? If you give me one more fact, I'll be able to reward you with full points!
Kia Ora Leah,
ReplyDeleteThanks for providing us with two facts about The Beatles Tour, well done! I like how you've added some description in to your writing; this helps your readers to understand exactly what happened. It sounds as though the crowd was swelling with excitement. Its unfortunate people had to get hurt, but people do crazy things at concerts when their idol is literally metres away.
Can you tell me another fact about The Beatles Tour in New Zealand? If you give me one more fact, I'll be able to reward you with full points!
Looking forward to your reply,
Cheers,
Jordan